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Tips for writing your final draft

Impressing an admission officer with your application essay is not easy. However, here are some tips that will go a long way into improving your chances.

  • Be creative. You can bring  to life even the dullest of topics by being creative. You can begin your essay with an appropriate quote or an anecdote but you must be careful that it fits flawlessly into the rest of you  essay. 
  • Take time to write a great introduction. The introduction gives  you the opportunity to make the first impression. As such, your introduction should be well thought, clear and should not appear to be hastily written. You must grab the interest of the admission  officers  and possibly  raise ques tion in their min ds  that will make them want  to read further.
  • Your admission essay must fit together. Make sure that the body paragraphs fit your introduction. You must not jump from one idea to the other in a haphazard manner and neither should you try to cram everything into your essay. This will only give your essay an appearance of being scattered. Furthermore, the admission committee understands that the essay can only contain snippets of who you are.
  • Be Lively. Your essay must be interesting to read. Give your audience details that allow them to clearly see the setting. Use names where possibl as their use give the essay a human feel. Use of imagery will also heighten the reader’s interest since your experiences feature prominently as supporting details.
  • Be Yourself. The admission essay is about you, your feelings, how you think, and your response to various happenings. How did you respond when you won/didn’t win the basketball competition? What does that reveal about you? The way your mind works is what distinguishes you from everybody else and you need bring that out.
  • Portray a pleasant personality. College is a place where you are required to interact with other students as well as the faculty and staff. Find a way in your essay of showing that you are easy to get along with.
  • Honesty the best policy. It is not necessary to overstate achievements or invent events that did not happen. Just use the truthful, seemingly unremarkable experiences creatively to bring out your strongest personality traits
  • Avoid big words. “Uninhibited wits  like Mort Sahl may excel  in derogating much  that is  sacrosanct to the American bourgeois. These untrammeled iconoclasts are securing an ever-burgeoning following among the intelligentsia…” yawn, yawn!
  • Revise and then revise some more. Go through your paper again and again and correct any mistakes you might find. Make sure your essay is free from  spellings,  punctuations, grammar  errors.  If  you  are  unsure  of  the meaning of a word, use the dictionary. You can also give your draft to others who can offer some critique.
  • Give your writing a break. Spend time away from your draft essay and determine  the changes  you would wish to make. Come back later and look at it with a fresh eye.

 Read more this article: Writing a College Application essay

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